Thursday, February 25, 2010

Originals

Eric has become quite the storyteller. He will go on and on and on about everything he can think of. He literally talks about everything he has going on in his brain. Sometimes, he is talking so fast we just can't understand a word he is saying. However, he seems to be getting the fact that he has to put some structure around them, an intro, a plot, and then bring it all back full circle with his ending.

His teachers at school captured his first true story that I thought I would share. Surprise, surprise...it is about hockey. ;O)

Famous Hockey Player, by Eric Lohse
I am the most famous hockey player ever.
I play for the team with the crest.
I am doing good with hockey.
It is still a good hockey and goalie stick.
I am famous because I wear a helmet.
I like to play hockey ever.
The End.

2 comments:

Lesly said...

WELL DONE OUR GREAT HOCKEY PLAYER, MAD DOG LOHSE, WE'RE PROUD OF YOU VERY MUCH AND WE LOVE YOU.

Dianne Lohse said...

Great story, however he needs to end it with LOBSTER...